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Brother/Sister Bond Story.

Journal Entry: Thu Nov 12, 2009, 4:23 PM



So, what I thought about. My original story, for my "thoughts" is postponed..

Again. >.>
BECAUSE.

I really wanna write this "Brother/Sister" bond between new friends.

The girl's name is going to be Yukari, she will be a few inches shorter than our main male character, Shinji. Yukari will have long lavender hair, usually worn in pigtails. Her eyes, a violent crimson. She's supposed to wear glasses, but refuses too.

She will be a two grades below him, in her first year of high school. He is in his third and final year. [Going by Japanese schools] She is 14/15. He is 17.

Shinji on the other hand, has attractive green hair and vibrant golden eyes. He is the local bishonen. <3 Shinji will be a bit of a jerk, though. Imagine Ichigo. A tough man who's not afraid of anything, will do anything to help those he cares about, but he will have a shy side.

There's two ways I'm thinking of starting this story:
I was thinking... Shinji could be behind a desk at work, he's around twenty five, owning his own business or something, and they get a new assistant, he figures out that it's Yukari, who has tried to find Mr. Shinji again.. and finally has.

That may be a prologue, and the story is his flashback...OR! I CAN START JUST ON THE STORY, whaddaya think? -points below-

Yukari will be laying on a hill, and Shinji will pass by it, and see her, not paying attention to her the first day. He will see her the next day, give her a glance, and continue on his way.

The NEXT day, he shakes his head, next he thinks to himself something like, "Why is she always there?" thinking about going up and asking, but decides not too. The next day she's in the middle of getting beat up, or something for some reason, and he helps her or something.

So which one you think I should use? <3

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:iconguirnou:
Oh my, thank you SO much for the watch I totally appreciate it :thanks:
:iconforbiddenfromsociety:
Of course. You totally deserve the watch!

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Dad: How was school today, son?
Son: Oh, it was okay... but some girl ripped her head off in front of the school bus!
Dad: *spits out coffee* O.o
Mom: *drops coffee pot*
:iconalternativemagic:
noticed ur comment on something and I was kinda wondering what the thingy in ur -...what's that called?- signature is from. The one that goes:
Dad: How was school today, son?
Son: Oh, it was okay... but some girl ripped her head off in front of the school bus!
Dad: *spits out coffee* O.o
Mom: *drops coffee pot*
Kthxbai.

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"The weather is beautiful."
"Not in my world. In my world it's raining."
:iconforbiddenfromsociety:
xDD
I made that up.
I was taking this one quiz on facebook and how I would die is ripping my head off in front of a bus, so I just made a little thing out of it.

So yeah. xD

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Dad: How was school today, son?
Son: Oh, it was okay... but some girl ripped her head off in front of the school bus!
Dad: *spits out coffee* O.o
Mom: *drops coffee pot*
:iconrissy624:
Yo! Long time, no talk. Anything new?

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lol XD 98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Post this if you are apart of the 2% laughing
:iconforbiddenfromsociety:
Yo!

Eh, nothing much. Just watched Freddy v.s Jason for the 89437895340957349857340954509th time.

The movie is not scary at all! but it's hilarious! Well, it has Freddy in it, so.

AND THE DELETED SCENES.
God the deleted scenes are hilarious.

Freddy kicks Jason where the Sun Doesn't Shine and Jason just spazzes for a second and Freddy goes and says, "Heh! No balls, huh Voorhees?"

God. Uh... What about you? xDDD

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Dad: How was school today, son?
Son: Oh, it was okay... but some girl ripped her head off in front of the school bus!
Dad: *spits out coffee* O.o
Mom: *drops coffee pot*
:iconrissy624:
I know I :heart: it.~

I didn't see the deleted scenes but oh well. :shrug:

:XD:

Uh not much. I went shopping all day yesterday and I'm tired. But now I can continue my cosplay project! =D

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lol XD 98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Post this if you are apart of the 2% laughing
:iconforbiddenfromsociety:
Haha, yes. There's only one funny scene in the deleted scenes. A.k.a the title of my journal post.

:XD: IS RIGHT

YAY COSPLAY PROJECTS. I need a job. :P I really do.

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Dad: How was school today, son?
Son: Oh, it was okay... but some girl ripped her head off in front of the school bus!
Dad: *spits out coffee* O.o
Mom: *drops coffee pot*
:iconrissy624:
:XD: Eh me too but i don't think anyone will hire a 15 year old. Also, as I'm waiting for paint to dry, I read my new fandom love. :heart:

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lol XD 98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Post this if you are apart of the 2% laughing
:icontriarii117:
nice fractals

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The world is all pointless accident. . .I exist, nothing else.
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:iconforbiddenfromsociety:
Thanks. :]

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Dad: How was school today, son?
Son: Oh, it was okay... but some girl ripped her head off in front of the school bus!
Dad: *spits out coffee* O.o
Mom: *drops coffee pot*
:iconrissy624:
OMG I found the best anime ever!!! I highly recomend it! It's called Ergo Proxy. It is very confusing but makes sense in the end. It is without a doubt a 'Grade A Mindfuck' XD It's only twenty three episodes. WATCH IT! . . . Please? -puppy dog eyes-

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lol XD 98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Post this if you are apart of the 2% laughing
:iconforbiddenfromsociety:
Ah, Ergo Proxy.

I wanted to start watching that, i did, but didn't have the time to finish the first episode.

Bwahaha.

I know anime. xD

Mwahaha :evillaugh:

I was actually going to pick it up, too. :D

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Dad: How was school today, son?
Son: Oh, it was okay... but some girl ripped her head off in front of the school bus!
Dad: *spits out coffee* O.o
Mom: *drops coffee pot*
:iconrissy624:
I started watching yesterday but I had to finish it today and I absolutely love it!

Vincent Law is awesome!! :heart: I luff him X3

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lol XD 98% of teens would be dead if Twilight said breathing wasn't cool. Post this if you are apart of the 2% laughing

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